My name is Huabao Wei, 17 years old, and 1.80 tall. At the moment, I am having my final year in the Eighth seniar high school in Urumqi city of Xinjiang province of China. When look back my three years high school life, it was stressful, but enrich and unforgetable.
During the three years study, my grade was always be in the middle level, and I am trying hard to adjust the way I revise and learn to the best, and developing the correct study manner, but still, I am having difficulty in the phisics and chemistry. I have being laying particular stress on liberal arts, due to the college entrance examination has always suppose that science subject provides more future oppotunities, in this case, I chose science as my main subject during the high school days.
When I have spare time, I like to join some phisic activities with my school mates and friends, such as basketball, Ping-Pong, badminton and swimming.
In the University, I would like to choose Financial Management, and this is the subject that I have alway desired and expected when I was even younger. There are quite a few factors affect my decition, the grow up environment, my parents were doing financial management when they were in the university, and my fathers' job are strongly relate to his profesion, I was heavily affect by them. what is more, the economy of China is not developed yet, and I expect to find an ideal job in China when I finish my study in (你想去那个国家)， and to make some distribution for the development of my mother country.
I choose to study abroad, because compare to China, the education abroad is more open and flexible, especially American, they are more focus on developing abilities. There are no standard anwers, students are not only a listeners, they can express their own ideas, and the teachers are not always the authority, their opinion could be questioned by students, I believe such an education system is more beneficial for my development. Meanwhile, It is in the key period of outlook on life and value in my age, to study abroad could give me more time to communicate with students come from all over the world, widen my internatinal knowledge, and cross cultural elaborative faculty.
时间很晚了， 翻的有点烦了。 哥们， 如果你这是发到国外求学的信， 劝你别发了， 十有八九得悲剧。记得我当初中学升大学的时候， 学的那个个人档案， 老师特别提到， 不要提因为父母怎样才决定选什么课目，自己的决定必须是因为个人兴趣或者野心。选择留学的原因部分写的不错， 不过注意，如果你能加些部分例如， 为什么你觉得那个学校应该接受你， 你有什么样的能力， 才华， 特长。 另外， 外国的都喜欢简短，直切主题，多余的最好删点， 例如 “但物理和化学成绩始终难以提高上去。我长期偏重文科，但由于在中国理科高考选择的机会更多一些，所以我高中就选择了理科。”
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